Tuesday, June 1, 2004
Changing Lettuce Suppliers: A hay(na)ku for Erica
"remove
the salad
and alert quarantine"
airborne
frog perches
on a cuke's
skinned
lip all
those miles above
In case you missed the link a few weeks ago, here it is.
Hay(na)ku has become my preferred form for occasional poems. I really love the way the last line in the final tercet always gives me just enough room to finish up. And the three-word lines in the other tercets link up sweetly with the subsequent one-word lines--almost as if the longer lines form loops for the single stitch of the next row of stitching to come through. Turn a long hay(na)ku chain on its side--it looks like lace!
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